lunes, 23 de junio de 2008

letter of Dracula by Ivan. A , Damian S and Ivan. K

Dear Mina:


I’m writing you a letter from the Castle Dracula, im very happy to write you this letter. I have to tell you how terrible is this count, this is the story:
When I arrived at the castle Count Dracula appeared an tall old man, his hair and face were white and he was dressed is black.
When I was shaving, I cut myself a little bit because the Count Dracula appeared, his eyes burned in fire.
Then I found that Count Dracula was a vampire.
I will write you when I can.
With love Jonathan.

1 comentario:

Pat T. dijo...

Nice work!!
Check: I...,how rerrible this count is...,A tall man appeared...,
check word order